Channel: English Spmnetic!β’ π
She is said ____ fluent in six languages.
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11%
being
14%
being
25%
to have been
49%
to be
Little ____ about the consequences until it was too late.
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15%
he thought
39%
did he think
30%
had he thought
16%
he had thought
He acted as if he ____ everything about the plan.
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33%
knows
37%
knew
23%
had known
7%
has known
Aight doneee tell your scores in the comment section out of /21 byebyee and goodnight imma sleep now πββοΈ
Helloo, hope you guys are doing wonderful. I'd like to ask you guys a question. What is your dream ? (Ambition, what do you want to do after spm, etc.) π
Here are some idioms for you guys:
1. Up in the air - not yet decided or certain
π Our travel plans are still up in the air.
2. At sea - completely confused or lost
π I was at sea during the meeting, I didn't understand a thing!
Have a nice day!
1. Up in the air - not yet decided or certain
π Our travel plans are still up in the air.
2. At sea - completely confused or lost
π I was at sea during the meeting, I didn't understand a thing!
Have a nice day!
Here are some idioms for you guys:
1. In two minds - Unable to decide between two things
π I'm in two minds about buying that expensive dress.
2. In a fog - mentally unclear or confused
π I'm in a fog this morning - I need coffee first!
Have a nice day!
1. In two minds - Unable to decide between two things
π I'm in two minds about buying that expensive dress.
2. In a fog - mentally unclear or confused
π I'm in a fog this morning - I need coffee first!
Have a nice day!
Here are some idioms for you guys
1. Blood is thicker than water - Family relationships are stronger and more important than other relationships, like friendships.
Example: Even though they argued, she helped her brotherβafter all, blood is thicker than water.
2. A friend in need is a friend indeed - A true friend is someone who supports you when youβre going through tough times.
Example: When I lost my job, Sarah was there for me every day. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
Have a nice day (β ββ β’β α΄β β’β ββ )β β€
1. Blood is thicker than water - Family relationships are stronger and more important than other relationships, like friendships.
Example: Even though they argued, she helped her brotherβafter all, blood is thicker than water.
2. A friend in need is a friend indeed - A true friend is someone who supports you when youβre going through tough times.
Example: When I lost my job, Sarah was there for me every day. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
Have a nice day (β ββ β’β α΄β β’β ββ )β β€
hi everyone, i just wanted to sincerely apologize. if you have ever sent me your essay to check, could you please message me again? i seem to have lost all the messages somehow, and i genuinely feel so bad about it. i believe some of you had sent it for weeks or nearly a month and i feel very very very bad about it... i promise i was not ignoring anyone β i really do want to help. i am so sorry for the trouble, and thank you so much for understanding π€ if you've sent me your essay, do comment down here so that i won't miss yours π«Ά
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- @enainspired ( i'm really sorry )
Today's Session of #nowyouknowwithena : Writing A Review! π¬π
This is usually my go-to when writing a review for SPM English Part 3. You can review a movie, book, product, or place, depending on the question. Just follow this structure and adjust according to your topic!
Title:
β’ Mention what youβre reviewing. Keep it clear and relevant.
Example: A Movie That Left Me Speechless
Paragraph 1: Introduction
β’ Say what you're reviewing (movie, book, restaurant, product, etc.).
β’ Mention the name and your general opinion.
β’ Say why you chose it.
Template:
If you are looking for [type of thing], you should definitely check out [name]. I recently [watched/read/tried] it, and I was really impressed. In this review, I will share what I liked about it and why you might enjoy it too.
Example:
If you are looking for a movie that will truly touch your heart, you should definitely check out The Pursuit of Happyness. I recently watched it, and I was incredibly moved by the story. In this review, I will share what I loved about the movie and why I think itβs worth watching.
Paragraph 2: What Itβs About
β’ Briefly describe what itβs about β just the basics.
β’ Donβt spoil too much!
β’ Say what kind of story it is (funny? emotional? action-packed?)
Template:
The story follows [main character] who [main plot]. Along the way, [something interesting or emotional happens]. It is a [genre] that keeps you [emotion].
Example:
The story follows Chris Gardner, a struggling salesman and father who faces many hardships while trying to build a better life for his young son. Along the way, he experiences homelessness, rejection, and heartbreak. It is an emotional drama that keeps you inspired and hopeful throughout.
Paragraph 3: What You Liked
β’ Talk about what you liked most.
β’ Use adjectives (touching, exciting, funny, realistic, powerful, etc.)
β’ Mention a specific scene or feature.
Template:
What I loved most about [name] was [highlight]. It was [adjective] and really [effect it had on you]. I especially liked [specific scene/aspect].
Example:
What I loved most about The Pursuit of Happyness was the strong bond between the father and son. It was heartfelt and really reminded me of how powerful love and determination can be. I especially liked the scene where Chris finally gets the job, the raw emotion in that moment was unforgettable.
Paragraph 4: What You Learnt or Felt
β’ Talk about the message, moral, or how it inspired you.
β’ You can include personal thoughts or how it relates to real life.
Template:
One thing that really stayed with me was the message about [lesson/value]. It reminded me that [personal reflection]. I think many people can relate to this, especially those who [group of people].
Example:
One thing that really stayed with me was the message about not giving up, no matter how hard life gets. It reminded me that success comes to those who keep moving forward, even when everything feels hopeless. I think many students can relate to this, especially those who are chasing their dreams despite challenges.
Paragraph 5: Conclusion
β’ Summarise your opinion.
β’ Say who you recommend it to.
β’ You may add a rating if you want.
Template:
To conclude, [name] is a [adjective] [type of thing] that truly deserves attention. I would recommend it to anyone who [target group]. I would give it [rating] out of 10!
Example:
To conclude, The Pursuit of Happyness is a powerful and emotional movie that truly deserves attention. I would recommend it to anyone who loves stories that are real, inspiring, and full of heart. I would give it a solid 9.5 out of 10!
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extra notes :
use at least 5 cohesive devices to make your essay transition smoother ! don't forget to be expressive when writing a review too.
This is usually my go-to when writing a review for SPM English Part 3. You can review a movie, book, product, or place, depending on the question. Just follow this structure and adjust according to your topic!
Title:
β’ Mention what youβre reviewing. Keep it clear and relevant.
Example: A Movie That Left Me Speechless
Paragraph 1: Introduction
β’ Say what you're reviewing (movie, book, restaurant, product, etc.).
β’ Mention the name and your general opinion.
β’ Say why you chose it.
Template:
If you are looking for [type of thing], you should definitely check out [name]. I recently [watched/read/tried] it, and I was really impressed. In this review, I will share what I liked about it and why you might enjoy it too.
Example:
If you are looking for a movie that will truly touch your heart, you should definitely check out The Pursuit of Happyness. I recently watched it, and I was incredibly moved by the story. In this review, I will share what I loved about the movie and why I think itβs worth watching.
Paragraph 2: What Itβs About
β’ Briefly describe what itβs about β just the basics.
β’ Donβt spoil too much!
β’ Say what kind of story it is (funny? emotional? action-packed?)
Template:
The story follows [main character] who [main plot]. Along the way, [something interesting or emotional happens]. It is a [genre] that keeps you [emotion].
Example:
The story follows Chris Gardner, a struggling salesman and father who faces many hardships while trying to build a better life for his young son. Along the way, he experiences homelessness, rejection, and heartbreak. It is an emotional drama that keeps you inspired and hopeful throughout.
Paragraph 3: What You Liked
β’ Talk about what you liked most.
β’ Use adjectives (touching, exciting, funny, realistic, powerful, etc.)
β’ Mention a specific scene or feature.
Template:
What I loved most about [name] was [highlight]. It was [adjective] and really [effect it had on you]. I especially liked [specific scene/aspect].
Example:
What I loved most about The Pursuit of Happyness was the strong bond between the father and son. It was heartfelt and really reminded me of how powerful love and determination can be. I especially liked the scene where Chris finally gets the job, the raw emotion in that moment was unforgettable.
Paragraph 4: What You Learnt or Felt
β’ Talk about the message, moral, or how it inspired you.
β’ You can include personal thoughts or how it relates to real life.
Template:
One thing that really stayed with me was the message about [lesson/value]. It reminded me that [personal reflection]. I think many people can relate to this, especially those who [group of people].
Example:
One thing that really stayed with me was the message about not giving up, no matter how hard life gets. It reminded me that success comes to those who keep moving forward, even when everything feels hopeless. I think many students can relate to this, especially those who are chasing their dreams despite challenges.
Paragraph 5: Conclusion
β’ Summarise your opinion.
β’ Say who you recommend it to.
β’ You may add a rating if you want.
Template:
To conclude, [name] is a [adjective] [type of thing] that truly deserves attention. I would recommend it to anyone who [target group]. I would give it [rating] out of 10!
Example:
To conclude, The Pursuit of Happyness is a powerful and emotional movie that truly deserves attention. I would recommend it to anyone who loves stories that are real, inspiring, and full of heart. I would give it a solid 9.5 out of 10!
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extra notes :
use at least 5 cohesive devices to make your essay transition smoother ! don't forget to be expressive when writing a review too.
full review example -
A Movie That Left Me Speechless
If you are looking for a movie that will truly touch your heart, you should definitely check out The Pursuit of Happyness. I recently watched it, and I was completely blown away. In this review, I will share what the movie is about, what I loved most about it, and why I think everyone should watch it at least once.
The story follows Chris Gardner, a man who struggles to provide for his son after losing his job and home. Although things get worse over time, he never gives up. Along the way, he faces rejection, poverty, and even homelessness. However, his determination to succeed and protect his son never fades. Overall, it is an emotional and inspiring drama that keeps you rooting for the main character from start to finish.
What stood out to me most was the strong bond between Chris and his son. Their relationship felt very real and honest. Firstly, the acting was incredibly powerful, especially from Will Smith, who played Chris. His performance made every scene feel raw and emotional. For example, the moment he finally gets the job after struggling for months nearly brought me to tears.
Besides that, the movie taught me a valuable lesson about never giving up, no matter how hard life gets. As a student, I often feel overwhelmed with pressure, but this movie reminded me that challenges are part of the journey. It also showed that patience, hard work, and love can help us overcome even the toughest situations. In my opinion, anyone chasing their dreams can relate to this story.
To sum up, The Pursuit of Happyness is a truly inspiring film that highlights the importance of family, determination, and hope. If you enjoy stories that are based on real life and full of meaningful lessons, you should definitely watch it. I would rate it 9.5 out of 10!
A Movie That Left Me Speechless
If you are looking for a movie that will truly touch your heart, you should definitely check out The Pursuit of Happyness. I recently watched it, and I was completely blown away. In this review, I will share what the movie is about, what I loved most about it, and why I think everyone should watch it at least once.
The story follows Chris Gardner, a man who struggles to provide for his son after losing his job and home. Although things get worse over time, he never gives up. Along the way, he faces rejection, poverty, and even homelessness. However, his determination to succeed and protect his son never fades. Overall, it is an emotional and inspiring drama that keeps you rooting for the main character from start to finish.
What stood out to me most was the strong bond between Chris and his son. Their relationship felt very real and honest. Firstly, the acting was incredibly powerful, especially from Will Smith, who played Chris. His performance made every scene feel raw and emotional. For example, the moment he finally gets the job after struggling for months nearly brought me to tears.
Besides that, the movie taught me a valuable lesson about never giving up, no matter how hard life gets. As a student, I often feel overwhelmed with pressure, but this movie reminded me that challenges are part of the journey. It also showed that patience, hard work, and love can help us overcome even the toughest situations. In my opinion, anyone chasing their dreams can relate to this story.
To sum up, The Pursuit of Happyness is a truly inspiring film that highlights the importance of family, determination, and hope. If you enjoy stories that are based on real life and full of meaningful lessons, you should definitely watch it. I would rate it 9.5 out of 10!
btw you guys should know how to write a review of an accommodation, a place of nature or anything alike as it is quite a popular topic now ! let me know if you need an example of it πΌ
Today's Session of #nowyouknowwithena: Writing A Review - Accommodation Edition! π¨π
Title:
β’ Mention what youβre reviewing. Keep it clear and relevant.
Example: A Stylish Stay at Arte Mont Kiara
Paragraph 1: Introduction
β’ Say what you're reviewing.
β’ Mention the name and your general opinion.
β’ Say why you chose it.
Template:
If you are looking for [type of thing], you should definitely check out [name]. I recently [stayed there] during [occasion], and I was really impressed. In this review, I will share what I liked about it and why you might enjoy it too.
Example:
If you are looking for a modern and cosy place to stay, you should definitely check out Arte Mont Kiara. I recently stayed there during a short family holiday, and I was really impressed. In this review, I will share what I liked about the accommodation and why I think it is worth visiting.
Paragraph 2: What Itβs About
β’ Briefly describe the place and location.
β’ Talk about what kind of place it is.
β’ Mention the atmosphere or environment.
Template:
The place is located in [area] and is known for [feature]. It offers [type of rooms/services]. The environment is [adjective] and suitable for [group/type of people].
Example:
The place is located in Mont Kiara and is known for its artistic and luxurious interior. It offers fully furnished rooms with modern facilities. The environment is peaceful and perfect for families, couples, or even students looking for a relaxing weekend.
Paragraph 3: What You Liked
β’ Talk about what you liked most.
β’ Use adjectives (modern, peaceful, cozy, luxurious, clean, artistic, etc.).
β’ Mention a specific thing that stood out.
Template:
What I loved most about [name] was [highlight]. It was [adjective] and made me feel [emotion]. I especially liked [specific feature or moment].
Example:
What I loved most about Arte Mont Kiara was the unique design on every floor. It was beautiful and made me feel like I was walking through an art gallery. I especially liked the rooftop lounge where I could enjoy the sunset in a peaceful setting.
Paragraph 4: What You Felt
β’ Share how the place made you feel.
β’ Mention how it helped you rest, bond, or enjoy the moment.
β’ Personal reflection or positive experience.
Template:
One thing that stayed with me was how [place] made me feel. It reminded me that [personal reflection]. I think many people would appreciate this, especially those who [group].
Example:
One thing that stayed with me was how calm and refreshed I felt after staying there. It reminded me that sometimes, we need to pause and enjoy the quiet moments in life. I think many students would appreciate this, especially after a stressful school week.
Paragraph 5: Conclusion
β’ Summarise your opinion.
β’ Say who you recommend it to.
β’ You may add a rating if you want.
Template:
To conclude, [name] is a [adjective] [type of place] thatβs worth visiting. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys [type of experience]. I would give it [rating] out of 10!
Example:
To conclude, Arte Mont Kiara is a stylish and comfortable place thatβs worth visiting. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys peaceful stays in the city. I would give it 9.5 out of 10!
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β¨ Extra Notes:
β’ Use at least 5 cohesive devices: (what I loved most, in addition, one thing that stayed with me, to conclude, especially, etc.)
β’ Keep it 200β250 words.
β’ Make sure capital letters and punctuation are used correctly.
β’ Be expressive and sincere β show how you felt!
Title:
β’ Mention what youβre reviewing. Keep it clear and relevant.
Example: A Stylish Stay at Arte Mont Kiara
Paragraph 1: Introduction
β’ Say what you're reviewing.
β’ Mention the name and your general opinion.
β’ Say why you chose it.
Template:
If you are looking for [type of thing], you should definitely check out [name]. I recently [stayed there] during [occasion], and I was really impressed. In this review, I will share what I liked about it and why you might enjoy it too.
Example:
If you are looking for a modern and cosy place to stay, you should definitely check out Arte Mont Kiara. I recently stayed there during a short family holiday, and I was really impressed. In this review, I will share what I liked about the accommodation and why I think it is worth visiting.
Paragraph 2: What Itβs About
β’ Briefly describe the place and location.
β’ Talk about what kind of place it is.
β’ Mention the atmosphere or environment.
Template:
The place is located in [area] and is known for [feature]. It offers [type of rooms/services]. The environment is [adjective] and suitable for [group/type of people].
Example:
The place is located in Mont Kiara and is known for its artistic and luxurious interior. It offers fully furnished rooms with modern facilities. The environment is peaceful and perfect for families, couples, or even students looking for a relaxing weekend.
Paragraph 3: What You Liked
β’ Talk about what you liked most.
β’ Use adjectives (modern, peaceful, cozy, luxurious, clean, artistic, etc.).
β’ Mention a specific thing that stood out.
Template:
What I loved most about [name] was [highlight]. It was [adjective] and made me feel [emotion]. I especially liked [specific feature or moment].
Example:
What I loved most about Arte Mont Kiara was the unique design on every floor. It was beautiful and made me feel like I was walking through an art gallery. I especially liked the rooftop lounge where I could enjoy the sunset in a peaceful setting.
Paragraph 4: What You Felt
β’ Share how the place made you feel.
β’ Mention how it helped you rest, bond, or enjoy the moment.
β’ Personal reflection or positive experience.
Template:
One thing that stayed with me was how [place] made me feel. It reminded me that [personal reflection]. I think many people would appreciate this, especially those who [group].
Example:
One thing that stayed with me was how calm and refreshed I felt after staying there. It reminded me that sometimes, we need to pause and enjoy the quiet moments in life. I think many students would appreciate this, especially after a stressful school week.
Paragraph 5: Conclusion
β’ Summarise your opinion.
β’ Say who you recommend it to.
β’ You may add a rating if you want.
Template:
To conclude, [name] is a [adjective] [type of place] thatβs worth visiting. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys [type of experience]. I would give it [rating] out of 10!
Example:
To conclude, Arte Mont Kiara is a stylish and comfortable place thatβs worth visiting. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys peaceful stays in the city. I would give it 9.5 out of 10!
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β¨ Extra Notes:
β’ Use at least 5 cohesive devices: (what I loved most, in addition, one thing that stayed with me, to conclude, especially, etc.)
β’ Keep it 200β250 words.
β’ Make sure capital letters and punctuation are used correctly.
β’ Be expressive and sincere β show how you felt!
full review example -
A Stylish Stay at Arte Mont Kiara
If you are looking for a modern and cozy place to stay, you should definitely check out Arte Mont Kiara. I recently stayed there during a short family holiday, and I was really impressed. In this review, I will share what I liked about the accommodation and why I think it is worth visiting.
To begin with, the place is located in Mont Kiara and is known for its artistic and luxurious interior. It offers fully furnished rooms with modern facilities. The environment is peaceful and perfect for families, couples, or even students looking for a relaxing weekend.
Besides, what I loved most about Arte Mont Kiara was the unique design on every floor. It was beautiful and made me feel like I was walking through an art gallery. I especially liked the rooftop lounge where I could enjoy the sunset in a peaceful setting. In addition, the swimming pool and gym were clean, well-maintained, and easily accessible.
Moreover, one thing that stayed with me was how calm and refreshed I felt after staying there. It reminded me that sometimes, we need to pause and enjoy the quiet moments in life. I think many students would appreciate this, especially after a stressful school week.
To conclude, Arte Mont Kiara is a stylish and comfortable place thatβs worth visiting. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys peaceful stays in the city. I would give it a 10 out of 10!
A Stylish Stay at Arte Mont Kiara
If you are looking for a modern and cozy place to stay, you should definitely check out Arte Mont Kiara. I recently stayed there during a short family holiday, and I was really impressed. In this review, I will share what I liked about the accommodation and why I think it is worth visiting.
To begin with, the place is located in Mont Kiara and is known for its artistic and luxurious interior. It offers fully furnished rooms with modern facilities. The environment is peaceful and perfect for families, couples, or even students looking for a relaxing weekend.
Besides, what I loved most about Arte Mont Kiara was the unique design on every floor. It was beautiful and made me feel like I was walking through an art gallery. I especially liked the rooftop lounge where I could enjoy the sunset in a peaceful setting. In addition, the swimming pool and gym were clean, well-maintained, and easily accessible.
Moreover, one thing that stayed with me was how calm and refreshed I felt after staying there. It reminded me that sometimes, we need to pause and enjoy the quiet moments in life. I think many students would appreciate this, especially after a stressful school week.
To conclude, Arte Mont Kiara is a stylish and comfortable place thatβs worth visiting. I would recommend it to anyone who enjoys peaceful stays in the city. I would give it a 10 out of 10!
πΏ Today's Session of #nowyouknowwithena: Writing A Review - A Place Of Nature Edition!
Title:
β’ mention the natural place you visited
β’ make it simple and relevant
example: A Peaceful Getaway at Lata Kinjang
Paragraph 1: Introduction
β’ say what you are reviewing (waterfall, beach, hill, park, etc.)
β’ mention the name and your general opinion
β’ explain why you went there
Template:
If you are looking for [type of place], you should definitely visit [name]. I recently went there with [who/why], and I found it to be truly [opinion]. In this review, I will share what I enjoyed about it and why you might love it too.
Example:
If you are looking for a peaceful escape into nature, you should definitely visit Lata Kinjang. I recently went there with my family during the school holidays, and I found it to be truly refreshing. In this review, I will share what I enjoyed about the place and why you might love it too.
Paragraph 2: What Itβs About
β’ describe the location and natural features
β’ mention the environment or scenery
Template:
The place is located in [location] and is famous for [natural feature]. It has [description of what you saw]. The air was [adjective], and the view was [adjective], making it perfect for [activity].
Example:
The place is located in Perak and is famous for its tall waterfall surrounded by a forest. It has cool, fresh air and beautiful clear water flowing down the rocks. The view was breathtaking, making it perfect for picnics and relaxing with loved ones.
Paragraph 3: What You Liked
β’ highlight your favourite part
β’ use expressive adjectives and describe how it felt
β’ mention one specific activity or moment
Template:
What I loved most about [place] was [highlight]. It was [adjective] and made me feel [emotion]. I especially enjoyed [specific thing you did].
Example:
What I loved most about Lata Kinjang was the sound of the waterfall and the calm surroundings. It was soothing and made me feel completely relaxed. I especially enjoyed dipping my feet into the cold water while listening to the sound of nature.
Paragraph 4: What You Learnt or Felt
β’ reflect on how nature made you feel
β’ mention personal thoughts or what you realised there
Template:
One thing that stayed with me was how [place] made me feel. It reminded me that [personal reflection]. I think many people would benefit from this kind of experience, especially those who [group].
Example:
One thing that stayed with me was how calm and stress-free I felt during the trip. It reminded me that sometimes we just need to disconnect from the busy world and enjoy the beauty around us. I think many students would benefit from this kind of experience, especially after exams or a long week at school.
Paragraph 5: Conclusion
β’ wrap up your thoughts
β’ say who should go there
β’ give a rating if you want
Template:
To conclude, [place] is a [adjective] place for anyone who loves nature. I would recommend it to [target group]. I would rate it [rating] out of 10!
Example:
To conclude, Lata Kinjang is a beautiful and peaceful place for anyone who loves nature. I would recommend it to families, students, or anyone looking to escape the city. I would rate it 9 out of 10!
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πΏ Extra Notes:
β’ use cohesive devices: (what I loved most, in addition, one thing that stayed with me, to conclude, especially, etc.)
β’ keep it 200β250 words
β’ be expressive and sincere β nature reviews are meant to feel calm & peaceful π
Title:
β’ mention the natural place you visited
β’ make it simple and relevant
example: A Peaceful Getaway at Lata Kinjang
Paragraph 1: Introduction
β’ say what you are reviewing (waterfall, beach, hill, park, etc.)
β’ mention the name and your general opinion
β’ explain why you went there
Template:
If you are looking for [type of place], you should definitely visit [name]. I recently went there with [who/why], and I found it to be truly [opinion]. In this review, I will share what I enjoyed about it and why you might love it too.
Example:
If you are looking for a peaceful escape into nature, you should definitely visit Lata Kinjang. I recently went there with my family during the school holidays, and I found it to be truly refreshing. In this review, I will share what I enjoyed about the place and why you might love it too.
Paragraph 2: What Itβs About
β’ describe the location and natural features
β’ mention the environment or scenery
Template:
The place is located in [location] and is famous for [natural feature]. It has [description of what you saw]. The air was [adjective], and the view was [adjective], making it perfect for [activity].
Example:
The place is located in Perak and is famous for its tall waterfall surrounded by a forest. It has cool, fresh air and beautiful clear water flowing down the rocks. The view was breathtaking, making it perfect for picnics and relaxing with loved ones.
Paragraph 3: What You Liked
β’ highlight your favourite part
β’ use expressive adjectives and describe how it felt
β’ mention one specific activity or moment
Template:
What I loved most about [place] was [highlight]. It was [adjective] and made me feel [emotion]. I especially enjoyed [specific thing you did].
Example:
What I loved most about Lata Kinjang was the sound of the waterfall and the calm surroundings. It was soothing and made me feel completely relaxed. I especially enjoyed dipping my feet into the cold water while listening to the sound of nature.
Paragraph 4: What You Learnt or Felt
β’ reflect on how nature made you feel
β’ mention personal thoughts or what you realised there
Template:
One thing that stayed with me was how [place] made me feel. It reminded me that [personal reflection]. I think many people would benefit from this kind of experience, especially those who [group].
Example:
One thing that stayed with me was how calm and stress-free I felt during the trip. It reminded me that sometimes we just need to disconnect from the busy world and enjoy the beauty around us. I think many students would benefit from this kind of experience, especially after exams or a long week at school.
Paragraph 5: Conclusion
β’ wrap up your thoughts
β’ say who should go there
β’ give a rating if you want
Template:
To conclude, [place] is a [adjective] place for anyone who loves nature. I would recommend it to [target group]. I would rate it [rating] out of 10!
Example:
To conclude, Lata Kinjang is a beautiful and peaceful place for anyone who loves nature. I would recommend it to families, students, or anyone looking to escape the city. I would rate it 9 out of 10!
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πΏ Extra Notes:
β’ use cohesive devices: (what I loved most, in addition, one thing that stayed with me, to conclude, especially, etc.)
β’ keep it 200β250 words
β’ be expressive and sincere β nature reviews are meant to feel calm & peaceful π
full review example -
A Peaceful Getaway at Lata Kinjang
If you are looking for a peaceful escape into nature, you should definitely visit Lata Kinjang. I recently went there with my family during the school holidays, and I found it to be truly refreshing. In this review, I will share what I enjoyed about the place and why you might love it too.
To begin with, the place is located in Tapah, Perak, and is famous for its tall and beautiful waterfall. Surrounded by lush greenery, it offers visitors a relaxing experience away from the noise of the city. Moreover, the cool breeze, fresh air, and sound of rushing water made the whole area feel calm and soothing. It is the perfect spot for a picnic, nature walk, or simply to unwind.
What I loved most about Lata Kinjang was how untouched and natural it felt. In fact, it was so peaceful that I felt deeply connected to nature. I especially enjoyed sitting by the river, dipping my feet in the cold water while listening to the sound of the waterfall. Additionally, there were plenty of shaded areas for resting and enjoying the scenery.
One thing that truly stayed with me was how calm and stress-free I felt during the trip. It reminded me that sometimes, we just need to disconnect from our busy lives and appreciate the beauty of the natural world. I believe many students, particularly those dealing with school stress, would benefit from an experience like this.
To conclude, Lata Kinjang is a beautiful and refreshing place for anyone who loves nature. Without a doubt, I would recommend it to students, families, or anyone needing a quiet escape. I would rate it 9 out of 10!
A Peaceful Getaway at Lata Kinjang
If you are looking for a peaceful escape into nature, you should definitely visit Lata Kinjang. I recently went there with my family during the school holidays, and I found it to be truly refreshing. In this review, I will share what I enjoyed about the place and why you might love it too.
To begin with, the place is located in Tapah, Perak, and is famous for its tall and beautiful waterfall. Surrounded by lush greenery, it offers visitors a relaxing experience away from the noise of the city. Moreover, the cool breeze, fresh air, and sound of rushing water made the whole area feel calm and soothing. It is the perfect spot for a picnic, nature walk, or simply to unwind.
What I loved most about Lata Kinjang was how untouched and natural it felt. In fact, it was so peaceful that I felt deeply connected to nature. I especially enjoyed sitting by the river, dipping my feet in the cold water while listening to the sound of the waterfall. Additionally, there were plenty of shaded areas for resting and enjoying the scenery.
One thing that truly stayed with me was how calm and stress-free I felt during the trip. It reminded me that sometimes, we just need to disconnect from our busy lives and appreciate the beauty of the natural world. I believe many students, particularly those dealing with school stress, would benefit from an experience like this.
To conclude, Lata Kinjang is a beautiful and refreshing place for anyone who loves nature. Without a doubt, I would recommend it to students, families, or anyone needing a quiet escape. I would rate it 9 out of 10!
overall, they are quite the same. you just need to adjust the adjectives you're using and the way you elaborate it ! and don't use contractions in your part 2 and part 3 ( i did that just now hihihuhu ). feel free to correct me anytime π«Ά
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β¨ how to apply good grammar in your spm essay (the easy way)
1. use the correct tense (past or present?)
- use past tense when you're telling a story or reviewing something you've already done.
β i visited the waterfall last week.
β i visit the waterfall last week.
- use present tense when youβre giving facts or general opinions.
β it is a great place to relax.
2. check subjectβverb agreement
- singular subject = singular verb
β he enjoys the view.
β he enjoy the view.
- plural subject = plural verb
β they enjoy the view.
3. watch your articles (a, an, the)
- use βaβ before words starting with consonant sounds
β a place to stay
- use βanβ before vowel sounds
β an unforgettable trip
- use βtheβ for something specific
β the river near the mountain
4. use connectors & cohesive devices
- they make your grammar smoother π
β firstly, in addition, as a result, however, to conclude
5. avoid run-on sentences
- donβt cram too much in one sentence
β i went to the beach it was nice we had fun and we swam.
β i went to the beach. it was nice. we had fun and swam in the sea.
6. use correct pronouns
β my family and i enjoyed our trip.
β it reminded me of how peaceful nature can be.
7. check your prepositions
β at the waterfall, in the park, on the weekend
8. use a variety of sentence structures
- mix simple, compound, and complex sentences
β the view was beautiful. (simple)
β i loved the view, and the air was fresh. (compound)
β although it rained, we still had a great time. (complex)
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β¨ easy grammar glow-up checklist before you submit:
β are your tenses consistent?
β did you use correct articles and prepositions?
β are your verbs agreeing with the subjects?
β do your sentences flow smoothly with connectors?
β did you avoid long, messy sentences?
β do all names and first words of sentences start with capital letters?
β¨ how to apply good grammar in your spm essay (the easy way)
1. use the correct tense (past or present?)
- use past tense when you're telling a story or reviewing something you've already done.
β i visited the waterfall last week.
β i visit the waterfall last week.
- use present tense when youβre giving facts or general opinions.
β it is a great place to relax.
2. check subjectβverb agreement
- singular subject = singular verb
β he enjoys the view.
β he enjoy the view.
- plural subject = plural verb
β they enjoy the view.
3. watch your articles (a, an, the)
- use βaβ before words starting with consonant sounds
β a place to stay
- use βanβ before vowel sounds
β an unforgettable trip
- use βtheβ for something specific
β the river near the mountain
4. use connectors & cohesive devices
- they make your grammar smoother π
β firstly, in addition, as a result, however, to conclude
5. avoid run-on sentences
- donβt cram too much in one sentence
β i went to the beach it was nice we had fun and we swam.
β i went to the beach. it was nice. we had fun and swam in the sea.
6. use correct pronouns
β my family and i enjoyed our trip.
β it reminded me of how peaceful nature can be.
7. check your prepositions
β at the waterfall, in the park, on the weekend
8. use a variety of sentence structures
- mix simple, compound, and complex sentences
β the view was beautiful. (simple)
β i loved the view, and the air was fresh. (compound)
β although it rained, we still had a great time. (complex)
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β¨ easy grammar glow-up checklist before you submit:
β are your tenses consistent?
β did you use correct articles and prepositions?
β are your verbs agreeing with the subjects?
β do your sentences flow smoothly with connectors?
β did you avoid long, messy sentences?
β do all names and first words of sentences start with capital letters?
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